Friday 21 September 2018

WALHT:present our speech

this is my video of my speech

3 comments:

  1. hi kiri
    I liked the way you used your hands to speak
    maybe you could speak a little bit louder.
    from Ella

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  2. Dear Kiri I Loved How You Used A Big Voice!
    Maybe You Could Do Fullscreen

    Ma Te Wa
    Sarah

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  3. Dear Kiri i really liked that you used actions maybe you can do full screen next time:)

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