Friday, 29 June 2018

WALHT write a explanation

WALHT write an explanation

Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)
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I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)
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I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)
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                 How a circuit works
Have you ever wondered how a circuit works? This writing will explain how a circuit works. We use electricity in all technology we use. We use it for our tvs, we use it for electric toothbrushes and we use it for wifi. Electricity is tiny particles that are moving called electrons. Simple circuits don’t work without a battery without a battery the circuit will not work all the power and electricity will not work without no particles moving around in the circuit. Circuits are all around even tv, phones, toothbrushes and more. A circuit works like a brain and it tells you what to do. The circuit tells the light what to do it is kinda like a signal coming up to the heart then to the light bulb. The  circuit works with a battery the battery helps the circuit work.

1 comment:

  1. well done kiri
    i really like your work.
    it is really interesting
    love from your cousin dayna

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